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十分惊艳的作品!蜘蛛也很可爱!

可实际上对于“蜘蛛8条腿”的观点表示怀疑。

蛛形纲动物存在8条步足,这点没错。

但是蛛形纲的“步足”特指后四对足,其口器旁第一对足称为“螯肢”,有2个。第二对足称为“触肢”有2个。

所以蜘蛛严格来讲应该是12条腿

Thank you for playing my game! And thank you for the comments! I'm not an expert with arachnids, I just used the generic English word for the most known "legs". 

i really like this VN but there is one problem
the main character is a bit annoying because he keeps changing his mood ALOT, when i choose no he became problematic all of a sudden and when i say yes he become super romantic its kinda funny actually 
i liked the art style except the girl's CG when she is about to kill you
i give it 8,5/10  thank you for reading (:

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Thank you for your honest review! And thank you for trying my VN!

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Really fun adventure with Aneidea, the deaths are hilarious with how expected it is for the protagonist to die from their insults to Aneidea in the bad ends. Always pick up the books/stones and absorb them as your own, compliment Aneidea, and you're set for a lifetime with your newfound best friend. Found every ending! <3 

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Thank you very much for the review! Wow You did the whole game! Take you for trying my very first game!

My pleasure AlexPaq, I went through my footage very carefully and jotted down what bad endings I encountered and I was very happy to get encounter all 18 bad endings! Aneidea is top tier character! ^o^

Loved the art in the game, the story was a good mix of sincere and bizarre, and the protective nature of Aneidea was adorable. Great work!

Thank you very much for the review!  You guessed right, English is my 2nd language. The voice over was really fun to hear! 

Whoops, I found a bug on the bonus route. I think it's because it doesn't remember the name I entered from previous runs.

While running game code:

  File "game/bonus.rpy", line 20, in script

    mc "YES! It's her! She's coming here to find me!"

KeyError: u'mcname'

Full traceback:

  File "game/bonus.rpy", line 20, in script

    mc "YES! It's her! She's coming here to find me!"

  File "renpy/ast.py", line 921, in execute

    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)

  File "renpy/exports.py", line 1373, in say

    who(what, *args, **kwargs)

  File "renpy/character.py", line 1251, in __call__

    who = self.prefix_suffix("who", self.who_prefix, who, self.who_suffix)

  File "renpy/character.py", line 1172, in prefix_suffix

    return (sub(prefix) + sub(body) + sub(suffix))

  File "renpy/character.py", line 1152, in sub

    return renpy.substitutions.substitute(s, scope=scope, force=force, translate=translate)[0]

  File "renpy/substitutions.py", line 278, in substitute

    s = formatter.vformat(s, (), kwargs) # type: ignore

  File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 563, in vformat

  File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 585, in _vformat

  File "renpy/substitutions.py", line 168, in get_field

    obj, arg_used = super(Formatter, self).get_field(field_name, args, kwargs)

  File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 646, in get_field

  File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 605, in get_value

KeyError: u'mcname'

Oh wow, didn't see that one yet. I will take a look at it later and see how to fix it. Thank you for reporting it!

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I think I was able to fix the bug/issue on the new uploaded version 0.16... You were right, it was because of the name.

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I love how loopy the protagonist is! No fear, no filter, no hesitation, nothing phases him, he's just super happy to be able to talk to someone, even if she might eat him later.

Thank you for playing the game and posting a comment!

love it thank you 

Nice! Thanks a lot for taking the time to make this review! I honestly don't know what to say! And you did one of the 3 routes to the very end! Hearing the voice over was really fun!